SweetChalida☆0000【小说】《诡计/漫步花田错》原著小说(中文版)
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一楼百度。
因为看英文版很痛苦,所以借助有道翻译把它翻成了中文。
有些语句不通的地方我根据自己的理解改过了,希望没有差错。
2011年12月02日 16点12分 1
level 4
Pathapee can only pretend to ignore the teasing and playful bantering of the twins, who came and stood themselves next to him and wouldn’t go away, even when he is trying to focus his attention on his mother and Chantoo, another maidservant who is helping to nurse the unconscious young lady.
Pathapee只能假装忽视这对有趣的活泼风趣的双胞胎,他们站在他身边,并且不走开。甚至当他试图把注意力集中在他的母亲和Chantoo,另一个女佣人正在帮助照顾无意识的年轻女孩。The unconscious young woman of whom we speak of has rashes covering her body and it seemed she wanted to alleviate her itchiness by scratching them, but he heard his mother’s gentle voice scolding the young woman while then telling Chantoo to bring a wet cloth to tenderly wipe it on the young woman’s body.
我们正在说的这个无意识的年轻女孩,她的身体患有皮疹,她似乎想通过抓它们来缓解她的搔痒,但他听到他母亲的温柔的声音制止那个年轻女孩,然后告诉Chantoo拿一块湿布来擦拭这个年轻女孩的身体。
This sight caused Pathapee to feel disheartened.
这情景使Pathapee感觉失落。
Her condition is worse than he thought.
她的情况比他想的更糟糕。
His two brothers still pretend to be of the obvious fact that he’s not in the mood where he can retaliate back, so they continued to tease him endlessly, and without any easy prospect of quitting.
他的两个兄弟还在假装不明白显而易见的事实,他没有心情去报复回来,所以他们就继续无休止地戏弄他,并没有任何想要停止的感觉。

2011年12月02日 16点12分 3
level 4
He didn’t know how to answer his mother.
他一点儿也不知道怎样回答他的母亲。
He himself does not even know who she really is, where she came from, and what her real intention is in coming to the resort.
他自己甚至也不知道她到底是谁,以及她来自哪里。
If he tells his mother, she’ll say he’s overdoing it when he doesn’t even have any evidence yet.如果他告诉他的母亲,她会说他说的太过头了,他甚至还没有什么证据呢。
“And is her condition serious?她的情况严重吗?”
Pathapee diverged his mother’s interest to Cher Aim’s condition.“
Pathapee转移话题询问Cher Aim的情况。
“I think it’s an allergic reaction to alcohol, so that’s why her body was covered with rashes.
“我认为这是对酒精过敏反应,所以这就是为什么她的全身都爬满了皮疹。
But it shouldn’t be anything serious.
但是它不可能不严重。
So I called Doctor Napat for instructions on how to nurse her and he already relayed the instructions to me.
所以我打电话给医生Napat请示如何照顾她,他已经给了我指示。
But he said if she doesn’t get better by tomorrow, we should bring her to the hospital.”但是他说如果明天她还没有好转,我们就应该带她去医院。”

2011年12月02日 16点12分 7
level 4
He became somewhat relieved when he heard the phrase ‘it shouldn’t be anything serious
他变得有点松了一口气。”当他听到一句'它不会太严重。’
But still, as long as she’s unconscious, even that cannot remove the mountain in his heart.“然而,只要她还没有意识,就不能使他减轻包袱。
“As punishment for the fact that you’re the cause, Din, I’ll have to order you to take the responsibility.
“作为你是原因的惩罚,,Din,我将不得不命令你承担相关责任。
Tonight, let the young lady sleep over our home, and you have to stay and watch her. 今晚,让年轻的女孩睡在我们的家,你必须呆在看她。
You are not to go anywhere until she’s better.”
你不能去任何地方,直到她好些了。”
He didn’t think of violating his mother’s command because that was what he intended to do anyway.
他不打算违反他母亲的命令,因为这也是他想做的事吧。
But the only annoying thing is that his twin brothers just happened to feel like volunteering as well.
但是只有恼人的事情是他的双胞胎兄弟刚好想要帮忙。
“You don’t have to worry, mother.
“你不需要担心,妈妈。
The two of us promise that we’ll help and stay here to take care of Ai Din’s prey. 我们两个承诺:我们将帮助并且待在这照顾Ai Din的猎物。
For sure, we won’t allow anything to touch or bother her!”可以肯定的是,我们不会允许任何事物接触或打扰她!”

2011年12月02日 17点12分 8
level 4
Akkanee and Wayupak really did what they said they would do.
Akkanee Wayupak真的做了他们说他们会做的事。
Cheaim woke up in the night.
Cheaim醒来时正是在晚上。
The rashness on her face and body were still present, although they had alleviated somewhat.皮疹在她们的脸和身体上还存在,尽管他们已经有所缓解。
Her first thought was how she came to be in this beautiful room, so beautiful and so far from the familiarity that she is accustomed to.
她的第一个念头就是她来到这个美丽的房间,那么美丽,与她熟悉的习惯不同。
And what puzzled her even more was the fact that the person sitting with his arms crossed on a chair next to the bed was her boss….Pathapee.
困扰她更多的是事实是那个双臂交叉在胸前坐在床旁边的椅子上是她的老板.Pathapee…。
Cheaim immediately moved to get up.
Cheaim马上起床。
She felt embarrassed that she was sleeping in front of someone else, especially when that person is a man…her employer…and, deep down inside, her number one enemy!
她感到难堪,她睡在别人面前,尤其是当那个人是……她的雇主,同时在内心深处,是她的头号敌人!
“You feel better now?
“你现在感觉好些了吗?”
His voice seemed transparently relieved when he saw that she finally woke up and became conscious.
“他的声音似乎明显松了口气,他看到她终于醒来,有了意识。
“Where is this place?”
“这里是哪里呢?”
“It’s my home.”
“这是我的家。”
“It’s your home?”
“这是你的家吗?”
“That’s right…You were really ill and I didn’t grab your purse from the resort, so I didn’t know where to send you.
“没错…你是真的病了,我没有从度假村拿来你的钱包,所以我不知道带你去哪儿。
Most importantly, here, there are people who can take care of you.
最重要的是,在这里,有人可以照顾你。
It’s better than returning to your own place and sleeping alone and ill.”这是比回到自己的地方睡觉,孤独和生病的要好。”
“What was wrong with me?”
“我怎么了?”
“You had an allergic reaction to…” he halted his words and chose to instead say, “How would I know what you were allergic to?”
“你有过敏反应…”他停止他的言语,换了一种方式说说,“我怎么会知道你对什么过敏呢?”
“Aaay. “Aaay。It may have been those shrimps in the day time.
这可能是在白天那些虾。
Cheaim answered without making eye contact.
Cheaim说,没有和他目光接触。
Pathapee shook his head.
Pathapee摇了摇头。Even up to this point, her strong mouth still persists.
即使到目前为止,她还是那么固执。
Pathapee still had not let out a word when he was disrupted by the voices of those people he had just referred to: the people who “can take care of her.
Pathapee仍未发出一个词时,他被那些说会“照顾她。”人的声音破坏了。
The voices came from the direction of the door that had been left opened.
“传来了门被打开的声音。
Pathapee flinched when he heard the twins’ impulsive conversation and then saw Cheaim’s reaction.
Pathapee抓狂了当他听到双胞胎的谈话,接着看到Cheaim反应。
Cheaim looked at Akkaneee and Wayupak confusedly.
Cheaim看着Akkaneee和Wayupak迷茫。
She probably heard clearly what the two uttered. 她可能清楚听着这两个人。

2011年12月02日 21点12分 9
level 4

Cheaim could only pretend to be ignorant of his gaze and instead turned to refocus her attention to her job.
Cheaim只能假装不认识他的凝视,而将她的注意力重新转向她的工作。
“In ten minutes, the car that will bring the travelling agencies to the cattle farm will be out.”“在十分钟,汽车将会把旅游机构带来的牲畜农场。”
“Ok…in ten minutes.
“好吧…十分钟。
That means we still have some time,” he raised his watch and looked at it.那意味着我们还有一些时间,”他举起他的手表,看着它。
“Time? “时间?Time for?”时间干什么?”
When he detached his eyes from his watch, Cheaim suddenly felt like she made a mistake by asking him.当他把目光从他的手表,Cheaim突然觉得她犯了错误,问他。
“Time for us to continue and finish what we had left hanging between us.”“我们继续和完成我们未完成的。”
“Khun Din!”“Khun Din !”
Cheaim turned her head left and right, as if afraid that someone would hear, even though that was not necessary in the slightest, as the door and windows were all shut tight, with curtains to block all eyes from peering in and ears from listening.Cheaim转头去左和右,仿佛怕有人会听到的,即使这是没有必要的一点点,门窗都吃紧,窗帘阻挡所有眼睛盯着看,防止耳朵听。
Cheaim took a step back when Pathapee moved forward … The truth is she could walk away and exit through the door because her job was finished.
Cheaim两个退了一步,当Pathapee前移…事实是她可以走开并退出通过这扇门因为她的工作已经完成了。
However, the reason why she did not move further away was because she could not deny that deep down inside her heart, a part of it was curious to know how he would ‘continue and finish where they had left off’
!然而,她为什么没有进一步离开是因为她没有否认内心深处她的心,它的一部份很想知道他是如何将“继续完成”!
He approached her, and came to stand in front of her.
他走近她,来到站在她的面前。
Both of his hands were inside his pants pockets and none of their body parts made contact.
他的两个手在他的裤子口袋,他们没有身体接触。
But warmth overflowed from that large chest behind his clean shirt, just a few inches away from her.
但从那胸膛温暖溢出在他干净的衬衫,仅几英寸不看她。
Then there was also the warm breath from his face; his face which bent down and made tender contact with her forehead.
然后还有温暖的气息离他的脸。他的脸,温柔,弯腰接触她的前额。
This caused the young lady’s heart to shake uncontrollably….again.这导致了这位小姐的心地震动。
“So, what will you say?”“那么,你该怎么说呢?”
“Say what, about what?”“说什么,对什么事情?”
“About your mother and …” He squinted, “…about us.“你的母亲和…”他眼睛眯成一条缝,“…我们了。”
Cheaim admitted that her heart swelled whenever she heard him join her and him into ‘us.“Cheaim承认她的心,每当她听到他加入了她和他的我们。’
But at the same time, she felt as if there was a box that restricted her heart from flowing away too far, despite her desire for it to do so.“但与此同时,她仿佛觉得有一个盒子,限制她的心从流动过分了,尽管她渴望它这样做。

2011年12月02日 21点12分 12
level 4

But as for now…至于现在…
“Let’s go or the people down stairs will be waiting.”“让我们去楼下的人将会等待。”
看过原版小说的人(Rasa @ AF),对小说和人物的评价:看过原版小说的人(白板@ AF)对小说和人物的评价:
About the novel, I think it's the best in the term of writting skill and the interesting plot. 对这本小说,我想这是最好的在这学期写技巧和有趣的情节。
It's written by the newbie novelists so the writing style are not so smooth. 这是新来的小说家写的这样的写作风格不那么平坦。
I think other books seem like fanfictions or chicklit when PLR is really smooth. 我认为其他的书看起来像fanfictions或chicklit当PLR真是光滑。
It's really a novel.这是一个真正的小说。
The plot is interesting too. 情节很有趣了。
In the novel version, we wouldn't know Cha-em at all. 在小说的版本,我们不知道Cha-em。It's full of suspense.
全片充满了悬念。We would know only Patthapee's point of view. 我们只知道Patthapee的观点。
We would gradually know Cha-em litlle by little just like Patthappe and we would know why he gradually falls for her. 我们将会逐渐知道Cha-em小一点,我们就像Patthappe将会知道为什麽他逐渐爱上了她
。Pathapee is a boring type of guy. Pathapee是一个无聊的类型的人。He's a thinker and a planer. 他是一位思想家和刨床。So he doesn't act much. 所以他的出镜率不高。It's better to know his thought not his action.它的更好的了解他的思想不是他的行动。
Cha-em is not smart, just like in the lakorn. Cha-em是不聪明,就像在lakorn。She's clumsy and always makes mistakes. 她的笨拙,总是犯错误。
I think she's unreasonable too. 我认为她不合理的了。
But in the novel, she's really lovable. 但在小说中,她真的很可爱。
She's dumb but she can win smart Pathapee's heart. 她是愚蠢的,但她能赢得聪明Pathapee的心。
The interesting part is that she's been a loser for her whole life when Pathapee is always the winner. 有趣的部份是,她一直是一个失败的,她的一生当Pathapee总是赢家。But finally, Pathapee would be defeated by her.但最后,Pathapee会输给了她。
Anyway, in lakorn it's not like this. 无论如何,在lakorn不是这样的。
I don't like how Pathapee tried to kiss her when they first met. 我不喜欢Pathapee想吻她,当他们第一次碰面时好。
It's not sensible at all to do sexual harassment to the intruder like that. 这是不明智的,每个人都这样做性骚扰闯入者那样。It's not Din I've know since TH at all. 这不是我知道因为日德标(Din)。It's even worse that Cha-em seems to like it. 更糟的是,它Cha-em似乎很喜欢它。-__--__ -
继续部分小片段,mintwix的描述,非小说翻译继续部分小片段,mintwix的描述,非小说翻译
Cha Aem's Mom offers her to be Din's servant. 妈妈给她的魅力Aem是喧闹的仆人。
Cha Aem refuses, but Din threatens to fire her as an employee.
搽Aem拒绝,但Din威胁要开除她作为一个员工的工作。
So she reconsiders and decides to stay as Din's servant. 所以她反思,决定留下来为喧闹的仆人。
This part is slightly cute and aww-worthy, because when Cha Aem agrees, Din's eyes "sparkle.这部分有点可爱和aww-worthy,因为当搽Aem同意,Din的眼睛“闪烁。"
Then the spark suddenly disappears because he just remembered she agreed to stay only because she has a mission to complete.
“那火花突然消失,因为他刚刚想起她同意留下,仅仅是因为她有一个使命完成。This confuses the naive Cha Aem of course. 这使天真的魅力Aem当然。Then the next day is when she gets drunk and sick.然后接下来的一天是当她喝得醉醺醺的,不舒服。
看过原版小说的人(Rasa @ AF),对小说和人物的评价: About the novel, I think it's the best in the term of writting skill and the interesting plot. 看过原版小说的人(白板@ AF)对小说和人物的评价:关于那部小说,我觉得它是最好的在这学期写技巧和有趣的情节。
It's written by the newbie novelists so the writing style are not so smooth. 这是新来的小说家写的这样的写作风格不那么平坦。
I think other books seem like fanfictions or...我认为其他的书看起来像fanfictions或者…
About the question on Adisuan family, compare to other books, they don't appear so much. 关于这个问题的Adisuan家庭上,相比其他的书,看起来他们并没有那么多。
But Jeed does appear a lot. She moved in to Adisuan family and drove Cha-aim home and to hospital. 但Jeed会出现很多。她搬到Adisuan家庭,把Cha-aim家庭和医院。
Fai in PLR seems to be a bit henpecked. 辉在PLR似乎有点“气管炎”。
He loves and respect Jeed so much.他爱和尊重Jeed这么多。
When they filmed PLR, Yaya was still busy with Kularb Rai Narm and they rushed to finish it quickly coz she need to be in DJA soon. 当他们拍摄PLR,Yaya夜雨还忙着Kularb Narm他们都很快就完成它,因为她需要在DJA很快。
So PLR team had no choice. 所以PLR团队没有选择。They need to cut her part off. Anyway, I still think the scriptwriter doesn't do her best on pulling us in to PLR. 他们得把她的部分了。不管怎么说,我仍然认为编剧不做她把我们最好在PLR。Anyway, PLR epi 5-6 are much better than 1-4.无论如何,PLR epi 5 - 6比1 - 4。

2011年12月02日 21点12分 14
level 13
楼主辛苦,谢谢分享啊,原著剧情果然很给力。
2011年12月03日 11点12分 15
level 7
楼主辛苦哈,福利大众,帮你加精了。[微笑]
2011年12月03日 11点12分 16
level 2
辛苦
lz
了,[Love]
2011年12月03日 14点12分 17
level 4
倒不是很辛苦。
其实因为半夜弄到一半,太冷了,我就只把剩下的分了分段,睡觉去了。
2011年12月03日 14点12分 18
level 7
恩恩 还是要说声感谢
2011年12月03日 14点12分 19
level 1
谢啦,原本我也想自已翻译再放上来的,不过我打字太慢了,只翻了第一段就没耐心了.....[88][88]
2011年12月04日 07点12分 20
level 8
哈哈 你很爱这部剧?
2011年12月04日 07点12分 21
level 9
[献花]辛苦辛苦!希望能有更多英文版片段~~~
2011年12月04日 08点12分 22
level 1
是啊!我想看完整版的,但是楼主说没有[拍砖][88]
2011年12月04日 08点12分 23
level 14
顶上去呀!哈哈!
当年的MM,我的初心!!!大爱MM
2013年08月15日 02点08分 24
level 11
我最想问楼楼的是这个书的名字?····
2013年08月18日 15点08分 25
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