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06天津作文题Dear Manager,I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but during my watching the film I found several problems.To begin with, before the film being shown exist too much advertisement. Besides, the voice of the film was too loud for us to listen. And it maybe make customers can’t still concentrate on the film. Moreover, the sign of exit was not easy to be noticed. I infer that it must be potential safety hazard.The above views are my advices of your cinema. I hope that you can solve these problems in time. I wish the cinema be better and better. Yours faithfully, Li Hua
2006年09月02日 13点09分 1
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格式怎么这么糟糕?
2006年09月02日 13点09分 2
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Dear Manager, I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to watch a film. The film was fairly wonderful, but during my watching the film I found several problems. To begin with, there were too many advertisements before the film being shown. Besides, the voice of the film was too loud for us to listen. Consequently, customers can’t still concentrate on the film. Moreover, the sign of exit was not easy to be noticed. I infer that it must be potential safety hazard. The above views are my advice of your cinema. I hope that you can solve these problems in time. I wish the cinema would be better and better. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 仔细对照一下,有一个句子出现两个谓语动词的情况.
2006年09月04日 08点09分 3
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谢谢老师
2006年09月04日 15点09分 4
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