这是周报上的一篇，帮忙看看谢谢！！！！ James Cook,as we all know,a distinguished English navigator,wasborn on Oct. 27th,1728 in England.After Cook took part in Royal Navy in 1750,he had taken expedition nearly 20 years from 1760 to 1779,in which he had reached the Pacific Ocean for three times.What was better,he was the first people that discovered Australia and New Zealand which today's are.We expressed regret over the matter that Cook died on Feb.14th,1779in Hawaii of the U.S.A. Die as Cook did,his spirite lived in our hearts.As a consequent of that,people named some places in the Pacific,as well as afamous university in Australia after James Cook to commemorate his contribute to many explorations. I believe that hadn't Cook been dead,he would have discoveed more completely new and beautiful places which were hidden in our world.这次写了好多长句子，但我又不敢保证全部正确，所以麻烦奇哥仔细改改，还有就是我结尾的虚拟不知用得对不对，费心了

James Cook,as we all know,a distinguished English navigator, was born on Oct. 27th,1728 in England.After Cook took part in Royal Navy in 1750,he had taken expedition for nearly 20 years from 1760 to 1779,in which he had reached the Pacific Ocean for three times.What was better,he was the first person that discovered what we call Australia and New Zealand today.We felt sorrowful over the matter that Cook died on Feb.14th,1779 in Hawaii of the U.S.A. Dead as Cook was(状态比动作好),his spirits lived in our hearts.As a consequence,people named some places in the Pacific,as well as a famous university in Australia after James Cook to memorate his contribution to the explorations. I believe that had Cook not(hadn't和其他否定最好不用在句首,有争议) been dead,he would have discoveed more completely new and beautiful places which hid in our world.不错的,有的词性不正确,小错还是不少.再仔细些.最后的虚拟正确,但是地方不是被藏,不用被动,仔细比较一下吧.