Michael 我写了今年的浙江卷作文（Film or book, which do you prefer?) 帮忙看一下 辛苦了 谢谢Compare with the book in the original, the film being more shorter,saving our time. Short as the film, we are keen on it. No sooner had we saw the film than we understanded the author's purpose. Others of us think that it is better to read the book in the original than to see the film. It is the original work's vocabulary that is fairly wonderful. What satisfactoryus is that read the original work can improve our ability of reading, writing and understanging.Just as the proverb goes that every coin has two sides. Reasonable as the former is seems, I prefer the latter. If I shouldn't read extensively, I wouldn't have many kinds of knowledge as far as I'm concerned. 

Compared with the book in the original, the film being more shorter,saving our time.(第一句有谓语动词吗?) Short as the film, we are keen on it. No sooner had we saw the film than we understanded the author's purpose. Others of us think that it is better to read the book in the original than to see the film. It is the original work's vocabulary that is fairly wonderful. What satisfies us is that reading the original work can improve our ability of reading, writing and understanging. Just as the proverb goes that every coin has two sides. Reasonable as the former is seems, I prefer the latter. If I shouldn't read extensively, I wouldn't have many kinds of knowledge as far as I'm concerned.你的基础有些问题,什么能充当谓语动词,主语不能是动词原形啊不过你肯下工夫,搞清楚这些就会有很大进步的.

Michael 谢谢我会把基础补上来的