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这是我写的你看的第四篇文章了,呵呵麻烦了阿是英语周报上的一篇嘿嘿 Rccently our class have had a heated discussion on whetherstudents should be allowed to go for a spring outing. As we all know,spring outing is an activity which students prfer to.At this time,students have two different view points about it. Some hold the view that having a spring outing is wonderful.First and formost,it's full of fun and an opportunity to keep in touch with the nature to enjoy scenery,so thatwe can keep healthy all the time.What's more,it seems good for students to enrich scope of knowledge through the visiting. Others take the opposite point of view that it can't be allowed.Not only it's a waste of time for students who have much to learn and it does harm to their study,but also some students are too young to take care of themselves,consequently it's easy to cause accidents. My point of view on this matter is that we can gain more knowledge than we learn in books,so it's just cxciting and necessary.
2006年08月27日 09点08分 1
level 6
奇哥啊,有一点还要请你指点一下,你传授的那些东西有一样我最不会用就是虚拟语气,在作文里我有时一上来我会不知道怎么用,在哪用,可是考试的文章又不能有太大的删改怎么办呢?虚拟可是能使文章出彩的地方哦~~~帮帮忙怎么才能让作文跟着我走啊?? 还有我原来是curtis的一个学生,那老外挺可爱的,就是那个老头harry是走了吗?为什么所有的宣传照片上都只有小石头(就是curtis)呢?
2006年08月27日 09点08分 2
level 7
Rccently our class have had a heated discussion on whether students should be allowed to go for a spring outing. As we all know,spring outing is an activity which students prefer to.At this time,students have two different view points on it. Some hold the view that having a spring outing is wonderful. First and formost,it's full of fun and an opportunity to keep in touch with nature to enjoy scenery,so that we can keep healthy all the time.What's more,it seems beneficial for students to enrich scope of knowledge through the visiting. Others take the opposite point of view that it shouldn't be allowed.Not only it's a waste of time for students who have much to learn and it does harm to their study,but also some students are too young to take care of themselves.Consequently it's easy to cause accidents. My point of view on this matter is that we can gain more knowledge than we learn in books. 这篇挺好的, 虚拟其实你就是反着想,这篇中,如果不接触自然就不能保持身心健康不就行了吗?我不太清楚小石头的事情.
2006年08月28日 04点08分 3
level 6
谢谢老师了,.....你的照片我们都没看到遗憾啊
2006年08月28日 14点08分 4
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