Michael 我写了2006年全国卷 二 的作文（李华申请做运动会的Volunteer）的那篇 请帮忙看看 辛苦了 谢谢I being a 18 years old girl, studied in a senoir middle school. I am keen on English. It is speak English that I can. I fall in love with sports. As a volunteer ,as all may know, enthusiasm is fairly significant. I believe I will become an enthusiastic volunteer. What's better, my hometown is Tianjin .No sooner had I was walking on the street than I can descern steeringwheel clealy. Student as I am, I believe I would do more and better for you. I also believe the experience will qualify me for the current vacancy in this Sports Games.I look upon it as a wonderful opportanity. I hope to apply for this work succeed. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. 

I being a 18 years old girl, studied in a senoir middle school. I am keen on English. I can speak English.(谓语部分不能强调啊） I fall in love with sports. As a volunteer ,as all may know, enthusiasm is fairly significant. I believe I will become an enthusiastic volunteer. What's better, my hometown is Tianjin .No sooner had I was walking on the street than I can descern steeringwheel clealy. Student as I am, I believe（不能省略从句联系词）　that I would do more and better for you. I also believe that　the experience will qualify me for the current vacancy in this Sports Games. I look upon it as a wonderful opportanity. I hope to apply for this work succeed. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. 可以，２０分以上

Michael 谢谢你 那么忙还会回我的作文帖子 应该说感激你你帮我改3篇作文了 我对作文的信心提高了 我还会继续坚持写的Michael 我机会我请你吃 哈根达斯 哈哈

我希望写作文的同学能多起来,有效果最好了,比冰淇淋强.