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以下是2005年广东卷的高考作文，有关守株待兔的漫画，麻烦您看看，又哪里需要改？还有在帮忙按25满分打一
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。 Once upon a time,there was a peasant,who works hard painfully everyday.He worked with a hoe and a rabbit bumped into the tree with a big noise at the same time.He is of happiness what a fat rabbit have it for dinner!And he got an idea “since it is so easy to get a fat rabbit.Why should I work so hard?”What was worse,all his crops were dead.This story tells us the truth that no pains no gains.大奇，辛苦了！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！还有您还记不记得05年的考题，北京的，一个小孩照镜子照到未来的漫画？那个作文到最后怎么写？我写了几句就不会了，那几句如下：This baby found his appearance,who he will be in the picture.This picture reflects the fact that he longs to grow up.下面怎么办呀？
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。 Once upon a time,there was a peasant,who works hard painfully everyday.He worked with a hoe and a rabbit bumped into the tree with a big noise at the same time.He is of happiness what a fat rabbit have it for dinner!And he got an idea “since it is so easy to get a fat rabbit.Why should I work so hard?”What was worse,all his crops were dead.This story tells us the truth that no pains no gains.大奇，辛苦了！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！还有您还记不记得05年的考题，北京的，一个小孩照镜子照到未来的漫画？那个作文到最后怎么写？我写了几句就不会了，那几句如下：This baby found his appearance,who he will be in the picture.This picture reflects the fact that he longs to grow up.下面怎么办呀？
