写的97年的作文帮忙看看 谢谢先 The other day,my brother and i rode to the cinema with me sitting on the bicycle's behind seat.scarceli had we reached the crossroads,when we were stopped by a man who was holding a flag and standing near a woman with a bicycle.What puzzled us was that the man said that we had found you."what's up?"we asked.The man,pointing to the police man,explained,"He stopped us half an hour ago and told us to fing the next offenders.Now,It's your turn and we're leaving,bye-bye."What was worse,we had to wait for another offender as them,thinking that if we had obeid the traffic rules,we would enjoy the film delightedly.

The other day,my brother rode to the cinema with me sitting on the seat behind seat.Scarcely had we reached the crossroads,when we were stopped by a man who was holding a flag and standing near a woman with a bicycle.What puzzled us was that the man said that we had found you."what's up?"we wondered.The man,pointing to the police man,explained,"He stopped us half an hour ago and told us to find the next offenders.Now,it's your turn and we're leaving,bye-bye."What was worse,we had to wait for another offender as them,thinking that if we had obeid the traffic rules,we would enjoy the film delightedly.Punished as we were, we realized the significance of the traffic law.

谢谢，我会继续努力练习

就职时添加了一个句子吗？有点难以置信

如果是学校老师看，大概会的几分啊？

你再好好看看，肯定在２２分以上

外加改了几个词，嘿嘿谢谢，我一定加油