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Michael 我是暑期特训的学生 我写了97年的作文(就是有CROSSROADS的那篇) 请你帮忙看看 谢谢On the account will I forget the memorable day.On other day, following by elder brother go to the cinema by bicycle, I am sitting on the seat behind. What made us surprised was that we were stopped by a man holding a flag and a girl, when we reached the crossroads. "Not until half an hour ago we were stopped by a policeman ." They continued " the policeman asked us seek the next offenders.If we were not succeed in seeking you, we should go on searchong. I wish you would not wait for a long time."No one can deny that we cannot live without rules. 
2006年08月05日 14点08分 1
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On no account will I forget the memorable day. On the other day, my elder brother went to the cinema by bicycle, with me sitting on the seat behind. What made us amazed was that we were stopped by a man holding a flag, when we reached the crossroads. "Half an hour ago we were stopped by a policeman ." They continued " The policeman asked us to catch the next offender.If we were not succeed in seeking you, we should go on searching. I wish you would not wait for a long time." No one can deny that we cannot live without rules
2006年08月06日 08点08分 2
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幽天羁鱼 楼主
Michael 谢谢
2006年08月08日 14点08分 3
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