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这是诗一般的电影,其台词的韵味很深。
非常期待楼主的台词~
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"The Book of Reservations.
“预约记录本”。
"As ever, that pause of anxiety and mute appeal.
一如往常,焦虑的暂停和无声的请求。
"But there, happily, it is.
在那儿!很好。
"Scriptural confirmation.
这是来自圣经的确认。
"Without a SΜile, without a word, he is eyebrowed and nodded to follow."
没有微笑,没有言语,挑眉和点头就是让他跟在身后的邀请。
Thank you.
谢谢。
And the wine list, please?
请问酒单?……
"On the back.
在背面。
"I see.
明白了。
"So things are different after all under new miSΜanagement.
在这新的不当管理之下,一切都不复从前。
"Might ha胤ve known it. Did know it, perhaps.
本该知道的。或许,已经知道了。
"The very table linen has lost its patriotiSΜ.
亚麻桌布已经失去了往日的爱胤国情怀。
"Plain white. We surrender.
纯白色。到底还是屈服了。
"And this menu -this t胤wanging laminated card –
而这菜单——嚓嚓作响的压层卡片——
"big as a riot pоliceman's shield.
大得简直就像防胤暴武胤警的盾牌。
"Hmm. At first glance, pizzas by the yard.
唔……一眼看过去,满是披萨。
"More pizzas than there should be.
实在是太多了。
"And too much designer pizzazz.
菜单设计者真有些激胤情过剩。
"Choose the right wine and ha胤ve it ready breathing for when she arrives.
挑一款好酒,在她到来之时就可以准备得当。
"There's a mid-price Chianti,which won't come plump in tight straw swaddling,
这是中等价胤格的勤地酒,并不太贵,
"but will do for auld lang syne.
祝福那些美好的往日,已经够了。
"Old times' sake being the precarious purpose of this tete-a-tete,
这双人午宴由于旧日的缘故,或许有什么危险的目的,
"and possibly a great big mistake.
可能会铸成大错。
"We said we wouldn't look back.
我们说过的,我们无法回头。
"Why did she e-mail him suggesting...?
那么她还为何会发邮件提议……?
"No, HE did."
不,是他提议的。
THEY CHATTER AND LAUGH(人们谈天大笑。)
"He commands - nice word -a clear view of the entrance,
他掌控着——这是个好词——入口的视线,
"lit contre-jour so that each new arrival, new candidate for his notice,
正对着门口,是他能够注意到每一个新的来人,
"appears to step from brightness to bathos with a tacit apology.
从光胤明步入虚伪,带着心照不宣的歉意。
" 'Sorry, I'm not...'
‘对不起,我不是……'
"But if not, what?
但若不是,又是什么呢?
"What will she look like?
她……会是何种模样?
"Fwop!
喔!
"The cork lea胤ves the bottle and his quick nose wants to pick up the escaping bouquet.
软木塞离开酒瓶,他敏感的鼻子追踪着逃逸的酒香。
"Will it be all right?
会不错吧?
"The waiter pours out the statutory measure –
侍者倒出了似乎是法定约束的量,
"one imperial glug - which he lifts and breathes over thinkingly.
优雅地汩胤汩流胤出 - 他举起杯,若有所思地嗅着。
"Not corked."
不必再盖上了。
That's fine, thank you. Lea胤ve it there.
很好了,谢谢你。放在那儿吧。
He'll do the pouring.
他会自己倒的。
"It's quite sharp but should broaden out.
葡萄不够熟,相当酸,应该让酸味逸出。
"He takes his tumbler of water, overweight bubbl胤es mobbing up to greet him,
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"Dark, sluggish ink.
暗色、钝感,墨水似的液胤体。
"And they drink.
他们啜饮一口,
"Becoming palatable."
更美味了。
You ha胤ven't changed. Oh, I ha胤ve.
-你并没有变。 -哦,我变了。
"Witness this morning's bathroom mirror.
他目睹了清晨浴胤室的镜子里,
"The grey, the flab, the stoop, the frown,
灰暗的发色,松胤弛的皮肤,弯曲的脊背,不展的愁眉,
"and in the deliberating, diSвelieving eyes,
深深思虑仍不愿相信的眼睛之中,
"something like...terror."
这些都如此……可怕。
Not to notice.
看不出。
" 'Was that one of the problems," he wonders,
‘那是不是就是问题所在?’他想知道,
"her blithe rebuffing of such facts as didn't match an optimistic outlook?
她对绝非乐观的现实其实并不关心?
"He could argue but the waiter intervenes with a second menu,
他大可辩论一下的,可是侍者拿着第二份菜单干预进来,
"which slices into the infant conversation like a sw胤eetly swung axe."
他温柔地摇晃着的利斧,把刚刚开始的对话劈得粉碎。
The menu, senora. Thank you.
-菜单,夫人。-谢谢你。
It's almost all pizzas. I'm afraid the place has gone to the dogs.
差不多全是披萨。这地方真是江河日下。
Don't be absurd - it's fine.
别这样,很好了,
In fact, at first glance,it's improved.
事实上,第一眼看过来,这儿比以前有所改善。
You know, when you suggested this,I wasn't so sure.
你知道,你提议来这里的时候,我其实没那么确定。
Almost any other venue.
完全可以是其他地方的,
All that surly waiter business was much more your kick than mine.
因为你对这里侍者服胤务的抱怨都比我要多。
But when I came in the door, I thought, "Well, OK."
来到门口的时候我想,“嗯,还不错。”
And I'm quite glad to see a menu that doesn't make a fetish of stracciatella and pollo sorpreso.
而且我很高兴这份菜单上没有恋物癖式的巧香纯奶和意大利惊炸鸡。
Good.
好。
Excellent.
非常好。
If you say so.
既然你都这么说了。
"Did he play the wrong card?
他是出错牌了吗?
"Could things be turning nasty?
怎么会变得如此难堪?
"Retreating to cover, he concentrates hard on the antipasti."
偃旗息鼓,他仔细挑选着前菜。
Come on. No sulks.
喂~别不开心。
Be nice. Sois sage.
友善一点。 乖~(“乖”是法语)
"Cajoling English and caressing French."
甜胤蜜的英语和亲切的法语。
How long has it been? Ten years?
过去多少年了?十年?
Eleven?
十一年?
Fifteen.
十五年。
No, it can't be that. Let's settle for t胤welve.
不,不会的。我们就算十二年吧。
And we've only got lunch in which to tell each other everything, so...
我们一起吃午饭是为了向彼此诉说这么多年来的事情,所以……
Truce ?
休战?
"For a moment, he withholds, mouth full of pause...
一瞬间,他忍住口胤中的千言万语,
"..which he can either spit out or swallow.
……或者一吐而快,或者缄默不谈。
"What's the use?"
那些话说出来又有什么用处呢?
Pax .
休战。
"His glass is drained, hers is barely touched.
他的杯就快空了,而她的几乎没有碰过。
"Judiciously, he brings the levels level."
他精明地又让两边持平。
So...
那么……
..who's to start?
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That's nicely put and no doubt true as well.
谢谢你说出来,毫无疑问那是对的。
The sort of thing they used to say on my school report, along with 'un-teachable' and 'half-witted'.
这种事情学校的报告里早就说过了:“无药可救”、“朽木不可雕”
'Guzzling' is unfair, though.
不过“大吃大喝”这个评价有点不公平。
I really can't manage the rest of this. 'Tippling', however...
其他的我的确如你所说。但是“痛饮烈酒”……
"I take it...
我把它……
Antidote to all life's ills.
当做生活之毒的解毒剂。
-Are there so many? -Ha! Funny!
-有那么多难过的事情吗?-哈!真好笑!
I wasn't trying to be.
我不是在开玩笑。
I suppose, in number, not many.
我估计,在数量上,也不算多。
That's reassuring.
那还好。
Just one great, big drink to me only!
让我独自一人痛饮一杯吧!
"Seems to help."
好像有点帮助。
I appear to ha胤ve lost my appetite as well.
我好像也没什么胃口了。
You'll lea胤ve a fishy.
你把鱼剩下了。
Half a fishy.
一半的鱼呢。
Sad waste.
悲哀的浪费。
"Borrow a taste?
拿过来吃掉吧?
"Better not.
还是不要了。
This hasn't gone quite as I expected.
非我所欲。
How did you expect it to go?
那你预期的是什么情景?
Oh, I don't know. More of the old...whatever we had.
哦,我不知道。谈论更多我们曾经……一起经历的一切。
Which wasn't bad, was it?
那并不坏,不是吗?
# We did ha胤ve fun. #
# 我们曾共享欢乐 #
Didn't we?
不是吗?
We did.
是的
# Da-da-da #
# And no harm done. #
# 未曾伤害彼此。#
THEY TITTER(人们在偷笑)
Till the King of Death arrived on the scene.
直到死亡之神上场。
Or should I say "the King of Prose"?
或者我应该称他为“散文之王”?
Or should you say nothing.
或者什么都别说。
Ha胤ve you finished? One minute!
-您用完了?-再等一会儿!
Yes, thank you, and I believe my friend has finished with his.
用完了,谢谢你,我相信我的朋友也是如此。
Any desserts? Coffee? No, thank you.
-甜点?咖啡?-不了,谢谢。
"HER no to both.
她为两个人都拒绝了。
"Dully he concurs, till an idea glows.
迟钝地表示着同意,直到一计心生,
"Glows and grows in the murk of his brain.
在他阴暗沉郁的脑海里闪耀亮光,
"Fine, fiery, feisty candle flame."
像是纤弱而炽烈地跃动着的烛胤光。
But I think I could handle a little grappa.
但是我想我可以来点格拉巴酒。
Una grappina. Si, signore.
是,先生。
"And away he zooms on waiter business, waiter among waiters,
他的目光追随着那位侍者,在其他侍者之间穿行,
"zapping and arabesquing from table to table like bees bet胤ween blooms.
在群桌间移步游走,像蜜蜂穿过花丛。
"Business and buzziness.
匆匆忙忙,嗡嗡作响。
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"Now, that busy waitress -the bee ballerina -is she sting or is she sw胤eetness?
而那位繁忙的女侍者呢?——那位蜂中的芭蕾舞娘?会带来灼人的痛楚,还是香甜的蜜糖?
"Nowhere to be seen."
看不见她。
Where are you this time?
这次你又想什么呢?
God, I'm sorry. Sorry indeed.
-哦,对不起。 -是该说对不起。
I hadn't expected you to ha胤ve gone to seed with quite such abandon.
我没想到你竟然会如此神游天外。
Or is this some sort of...
或许,这是某种……
cock-eyed performance you're putting on for my special benefit?
你特别针对我才做出的荒唐举动?
I think I need to think about that one.
……这我得好好想想。
Right. Well, while you're doing that, I'll tell you what I think.
好。那么,在你想的时候,我先告诉你我是怎么想的。
For which we need to go back to your poems.
我们还是回到你的诗集吧。
It strikes me you don't understand them yourself. They're not about me.
我很奇怪你竟然不懂你自己的诗集。它们不是关于我的。
I wasn't the kidnap victim - it was you who were snatched and carried away to some region of darkness by...
被绑走的人不是我——是你,是有人把你绑去了黑胤暗的深渊,
Oh, Let's call her the Queen of the Fairies. Don't interrupt.
那人是……算了,我们叫她仙后吧。别打断我!
I'm finding the words as I go but when I've stopped, we'll see if the theory's up to scrutiny.
我在找合适的语言来表达,等我说完再看我的逻辑能不能经得起推敲。
Now, according to my logic, the Eurydice that you're trying to rescue with your bra胤ve little song must be yourself,
那么根据我的逻辑,那位你试图通过你勇敢的小曲子拯救的妻子,就是你自己,
your inner self, your soul.
你的内在,你的灵魂。
But you've not been in touch with that in your entire life.
但是你自己一生都不曾知晓。
Which puts you in a hole, strategically speaking. And who was it dumped you there in the first place?
策略点说,是谁让你跌入深渊?是谁先抛弃了你?
The kidnapper I was talking about, whom I can now reveal to be the Lyric Muse, who should ha胤ve left you alone to work out your problems in some healthier fashion, and not led you on, not made you confuse poetry with therapy.
我刚刚说的那位绑胤架犯,我现在想起来了是“缪斯女神”,她本该让你独处,让你用更好的方式解决自身的问题,而不是让你执胤迷胤不胤悟,沉浸在吟诗疗法中不能自拔。
And who's also to blame for your present state of emotional arrest, infantile truculence and drunken flippancy.
而你现在的情感困窒,孩子气的粗胤暴、醉醺醺的无礼,她才是主胤谋。
It's not just that you're stuck in the past. You're stuck in your poems.
你不仅仅困在了过去,你还困在了你的诗里。
Which ha胤ve their merits. They're nicely written,they're clever and so on.
这些诗有闪光点,表达优美,用语精妙等等。
But they're misconceived, false,hollow, wrong.
但它们完全是虚伪不实的,大错特错。
You should never ha胤ve gone there.
你本不必落入如此田地的。
Yet you did. That... That's the catastrophe. That's the disaster.
可是你落入了……那才是灾胤难与不幸。
You're going to ha胤ve to repeat that. I want to write it down, especially the bit about
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报告……19-26楼是度娘抽了多发的……摆脱吧主大人删除一下吧……拜托了……
2011年08月29日 14点08分
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强烈建议吧主加精!!谢谢漠然逝的分享,我最近也在译,你译的真好
2011年08月29日 14点08分
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!!!!太激动了!!只有感叹号能够表达我的情感了!!!我最爱找中英文对照了,而且Alan的片子有的字幕都没有。楼主辛苦!细细品味。
2011年08月29日 14点08分
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谢谢搂主!这楼值得细细品味。
Alan 确实是越老越有味道~ 特别是眼神,电压越来越高了~~
2011年08月29日 18点08分
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谢谢楼主,我全部收走了~
昨天又看了一遍电影,果然很有味道!两个人的对手戏,90分钟,但绝对不会觉得无聊和腻味,全看演员资深的表演功底了~
2011年08月30日 00点08分
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楼主辛苦了!我非常喜欢午宴之歌这部作品,本想看看有没有英文原版书的,但是没找到,最近正想抄到本子上呢~
2011年08月30日 02点08分
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这个剧本文辞优雅,一直想看中英对照来着,thank u!
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