level 11
2011年暑期第一篇英语写作:We should learn to...
1. What should we learn to do?
2. Why must we learn to do it?
3. Give at least one example toexplain your point of view.
写作要求:
1. 不少于60字
2. 条理清晰,按照提问要求写作
3. 句子通顺,用词合理
4. 8月13号前 原创跟帖 注意批改点评
2011年08月12日 00点08分
1
level 6
We should learn to be a good student
We should learn to be a good student. So, we should always help others. We should be honest . We should do housework. We should read a book every week. If we help others, others will also help us. And , do a good student is necessary. So, we should learn to be a good student. It is helpful to us.
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2011年08月12日 03点08分
2
level 1
We ShouldLearn To Be Hopeful
What should we learn to?
L think we should learn to be hopeful.
Maybe you will ask, Why we must learn to behopeful?
It is necessary to be hopeful because thereare a lot of difficulty are waiting for our on the of life.
If we can not be hopeful, we will fail foreverand will be sad all the time.
For example, when we do not get good grades,we should keep hopeful and begin to study hard.
No matter how dark the sky, as long as optimisticwe will be happy.
2011年08月12日 07点08分
4
level 1
改一下:It is necessary to be hopeful because there are a lot of difficulty are waiting for us on the way of our life.
2011年08月12日 08点08分
5
level 7
We should learn to make friends.
Getting on well with friends is very important.
Your friends will help you to deal with the problems if you have some problems.
When you have troubles, they will give you a hand.
Friends are also good teachers.
They will teacher you be honest.
So, it is useful to learn to make friends.
Now try to make friends.
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2011年08月12日 09点08分
6
level 7
We should learn to be friendly
We should learn to be friendly to everyone.
If you want to be friendly , you must help everybody.
For example, there is a question which someone don't understand.
We can help him or her to teach this question.
They will say you are very friendly.
Now let's be friendly to everyone!
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2011年08月12日 09点08分
7
level 1
We should learn to be friendly
We should learn to be friendly to evwrybody.
If you want to be friendly, you must say thanks with everbody.
If you want to be friendly , you must help each other.
We can help him or her to understand each other.
They will say you are very friendly.
Now you are very friendly.
2011年08月12日 11点08分
8
level 7
We should learn to be honest
We should learn to be honest.
It is a fine virtue for everyone.
A man of honest is loved by all.
Without integrity,he will lose the best friend.
Be honest is especia-lly important for students.
We should finish out homework independently and finish the test for ourselves.
If you aren't honest, people will not believe you and no one will help you.
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2011年08月13日 04点08分
9
level 5
What should we learn to do?
I think that we should learn to help others.
Why must we learn to do it?
We must learn to do it because it can make others feel happy.
Of course, you will also feel happy if you do that.
We should learn to hope ,too.
It because hope can bring us happiness, brave,intelligence and so on.
We should learn to do a lot of things.
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2011年08月13日 07点08分
10
level 8
We should learn to help others,
Help other people are very happy.
We must learn to help others because it isimportant for us to help others.
For example,we can help others like givinghim or her a pencil or pen when they will use.
We can do many many things to help otherpeople,
What do you think so?
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2011年08月13日 08点08分
12
level 6
We should learn to be a good students.
We must get on well with our classmates, it is very important.
Our classmate can give us a lot of help.
If we work very hard, we will get a good mark.
We should help teachers and parents, because they are very busy.
To be a good students is not very easy, but it is important and necessary
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2011年08月14日 01点08分
13
level 7
We should learn to read some books.
We must read some books to get knowledge.
We must to do it because if you don’t read books,you will not have more information.
In our life,we can read some books to help our friends to answer some questions what they don’t know.It is very kindness for you.
Reading books are very important.
It is difficult for us to read so many books,but we must try to do it.
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2011年08月14日 03点08分
14
level 7
We should learn to...
I think we should learn to do some housework。
We must to do some housework because if you never do housework ,you will become more and more lazy.It is a bad habit.If you always do housework,you will become more and more happy because Your parents will give you praise and we can get happiness from this。
Learn to do some housework is very important.So,let's do more and more housework
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2011年08月14日 04点08分
15
level 7
We should learn to...
We should learn to help others. When people need help, we should help them. We should learn to be honest. We mustn't tell lies. When we are wrong. We should tell the truth to our parents. We should learn to read some books because books are very useful. They are good for us. We should learn to say thanks to people who help us. It's polite of us.
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2011年08月14日 04点08分
16
level 7
We should learn tohow to study.
We must study toget knowledge.
We must learn tohow to study because study is useful and important for us.
For example, if weknow how to study, we will have a lot of time to do other things.
So, I think weshould learn to how to study.
What do you thinkso?
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2011年08月14日 10点08分
17
level 1
改一下:If you want to be friendly, you must say thanks for everbody.
We must understand each other.
2011年08月14日 11点08分
18
level 2
We should learn to...
We should learn to be good to our classmates because if you are friendly to others ,other students will also give you a lot of help .They are very useful.For a example , you give somebody a help ,he will also give you some help when you need helps . So,it is very necessary to be good to our classmates
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2011年08月14日 11点08分
19
level 8
We should learn to grow up.
We must learn to do it because our parents will become older and older.
Our parents feel tired when they finish their work .
But,they have to do the housework and cook meals when they back home.
If we can do these ourselves,our parents will have more time to relax .
We will live without parents' care in the future.
So,I think it is important for us to learn this.
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2011年08月14日 13点08分
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