【原创】Sound of Silence
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2011年05月31日 22点05分 1
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四月残花 楼主
于是这篇文其实是我用了一个小时(上课的时候)写的
名字取自一首叫《Sound of Silence》的歌 (很好听的歌 而且很有名呢!)
这文就当作是回礼 献给抹茶和啊咧咧君 感谢你们让我听那美好的合唱~~~
先说好
内容无爱 文风诡异 结局雷人 而且连写文的我也不知道自己在写什么
拍砖可以但请务必轻力一点……
2011年05月31日 22点05分 2
level 7
四月残花 楼主
…Hello darkness,my old friend.
...I’ve come totalk to you again.
…A vision softly creepingleft it seeds while I was sleeping.
…The vision thatwas planted in my brain still remains,
…Within the soundof silence…
The icy breezesunk the starlight upon those footsteps as his shadow danced between thestairs. Once again, like every night he used to sore through darkness, theyoung phantom gazed at the silver cape hanging beside the hat with a delicatesilver ribbon as if someone were standing there, looking right back at him.
He wondered, asusual, would the one he awaited show up, or is this another date with thesoundless night under the blue corn moon.
Unlike thosedrumming heartbeats of those who expects, time flows in mute. He soon realisethe clock would strike ten, meaning only two hours would be left till he grasp anotherjewellery of truth in his gloved palm, and vanish in clouds of smoke leavingthose who chases him asleep.
“…The very lasttime…” he murmured softly.
With a smile, he raisedhis hands, clothed himself in white, and spread the wings like an angel do,thinking of the azure reflection which appears in his dreams of sleeplessnights.

2011年05月31日 22点05分 3
level 7
四月残花 楼主
…In the naked lightI saw ten thousand people, maybe more.
…People talkingwithout speaking.
…People hearingwithout listening.
…People writingsongs that voices never share, and no one dared,
…Disturb thesound of silence…
The moonlight cutsthe azure figure and merged it in the snow white cape. Playful as ever, thephantom thief smiled. The next thing he noticed was that the black shirt was creasedwith the smell of the rain. Damn the weather, he cursed at the bottom of hisheart. What remains the same was the poker face which shows empty emotions,peaceful yet rampant.
“Sorry to keep youwaiting.”
“Well, you’re righton time,” hands in pocket, he slowly moved towards the silver silhouette, “Iwas just wondering will I have the honour to invite you for tea at the blockhouse?”
“My, my,” helaughed, “It would be my pleasure. But I do prefer having dinner with you inthis wonderful moonlight.”
‘Wonderful? ‘Hechuckled quietly, ‘the weather had been plenty nice alright. I’d rather have a cupof hot coffee on the table and a novel in my hands than waiting for a thief whopranks in the frosty rain.’
The dazzling starlightpoured gently on the two.
No one dared todisturb such peaceful sheets of silence which floats and sank. Wordless, thenight slowing dies in the cries of the winds.
  

2011年05月31日 22点05分 5
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四月残花 楼主
…Silence like acancer grows.
…Hear my wordsthat I might teach you.
…Take my armsthat I might reach you.
…But my words,like silent raindrops fell and echoed,
…In the wells ofsilence…
The crimson rubymirrors the elegant curves of another gem which sleeps within.
The last smile inboth the phantom’s and the detective’s face has faded. A voice sounded from thedeepest parts of their hearts in the same time, whispering, and they realisethat this is the very last time they would meet one another.
Another cursedfate would soon come to an end.
“…You don’t haveto.” The detective said in a lonesome tone.
You don’t have toleave. You don’t have to die.
Not for athousand reason should your life be wasted and not for a single reason should Inot make you stay.
The sound ofsilence echoed and roared in the darkness, carefully painting colors of theirfuture — black. The phantom started to wonder if there would ever be lights ofhope shining upon his dreadful path, or would there be an exit that leads himout of the pain of despair, where a chance that he could stay with the one helove still exists.
“I’m afraid thisis a ‘farewell’ instead of a ‘goodbye’.”He said softly, kneeling down beforethe sorrow young detective and left a warm kiss on his hands, “the dinner willhave to wait.”
That was a joke;He tried to smile, and failed.
The poker startsto turn pale. Slowly, it started to crush. Finally, pearls rolled from thecyanine eyes, forming a river of liquid glass.
“…I’ll go withyou.”

2011年05月31日 22点05分 6
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四月残花 楼主
…The people bowedand prayed to the neon god they made.
…The sign flashedout its warning in the words that it was forming.
…The sign said, “Thewords of the prophets are written on the subway halls and tenement halls.
…And whispered inthe sound of silence…
Once again, theKudou residence is filled with emptiness.
Still and calm,the monochrome print of Kudou Shinichi and Kuroba Kaito sits on the shelf. Rightbeside it, the bloody red Pandora casts traces of tears.
Some said, thosewere the colors of the bloodshed for the inevitable destiny. Some said, thosewere the colors of the love between detectives and phantoms.
And I said, thatwas the secret that should never be revealed.
Perhaps thosewere stories written to be untold, and mysteries floated yet to be sank.Penalty was the only choice for those who rebel the streams of time.
Those were thesecrets of life and love,
And,
The sound ofsilence.

2011年05月31日 22点05分 7
level 7
四月残花 楼主
   【End】
2011年05月31日 22点05分 8
level 13
每段前面的语句很美哟。。。
其实寂静中才更能清晰的分辨细枝末节,一些东西会变得很美好
“…I’ll go with you.”
嘛,其实用英文能写好一篇文章很不容易,其实这文上下除了那些文段前的句子,最打动我的就是这句话了吧,我会和你一起,一起生活一起死去,一起天堂一起地狱,一起走过人生的所有风景。
这就是最无私最深沉的感情了,相偎相依~~~~
这也就是生命力的爱和力量,守护着你我的秘密~~~~~
喜欢这文。。
不过小花,这文感觉是不错啦。。下次用英文能把人物的感情和周围的环境过渡写得更加细腻一点就好了。。。
2011年06月01日 01点06分 9
level 6
表示这货是走在路上一边走一边看的- -中途还差点摔了两跤。。看看你老婆多爱你><
呃。。看的时候就在想了。。是该多背单词了0.0
喜欢这文文。。第一次发现英语也挺有爱的。。
倒数第二段很美。。就是因为两位死了很郁闷><
“I’m afraid this is a ‘farewell’ instead of a ‘goodbye’.”He said softly, kneeling down before the sorrow young detective and left a warm kiss on his hands, “the dinner will have to wait.”
不管是这句话还是kid的动作都很有美感,很让人感慨。
其实这是he。。最后终于可以在那个世界相依相守,总比相思却不能相亲要好。。
好吧。。我也不知道我在说神马。。小花你无视吧><

2011年06月01日 02点06分 10
level 5
天啊你真的把这篇文放上来了……佩服佩服[真棒]
不过怎么只有5段?你不是一共写了9段多的么?这样浓缩了很无爱啊[汗]
话说我很郁闷没有快斗出现呢 [揉脸] 新一伟大了竟然真的和黑羽一起去死……
你为什么不发他们一起挂掉的那段!!! 我恨你!!!![扯花]
快把那段发上来啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊[怒]
[拍砖]写了文不发是坏孩子!我要看殉情!!!!!!!

2011年06月01日 02点06分 11
level 4
- -求翻译TAT
2011年06月01日 05点06分 12
level 8
哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦
哦my lady gaga
有爱
眯眼~~~
不知道肿么说了……
被《一直很安静》雷死了还没恢复……
2011年06月01日 05点06分 13
level 6
表示我才六年级英语无力根本看不懂。。。。。。
2011年06月01日 05点06分 14
level 9
[瘫坐]才发现自己英语多么不好…………看着这个有点费劲了……语法语法……句式句式……
半小时后……
好文采哦~~~偶喜欢这种悲悲淡淡滴文风~~也喜欢这种角度滴描写~~~
生死相随~~~[大心]~~~~小颖最喜欢虐文啦~~~~英伦风万岁~~~~
[揉脸]虽然到最后也米弄懂……他们因为啥要死……不过都死了好呀~~~这是传说哦~~~这会成为一段美丽滴神话~~~~

2011年06月01日 12点06分 15
level 9
[惊讶]亲爱滴~~~此文可不可以转到【虐新吧】呀~~~~好有爱滴英伦风~~~~~
乃可以自己转、或是偶帮乃转……怎样怎样~~~[笑眼]
2011年06月01日 12点06分 16
level 9
[拍砖]英语考试从不考这种文风……那些作为无聊死啦~~
[大心]受乃启发~~~下次考试偶要写这种文风~~~就算老师不给偶分………………
2011年06月01日 12点06分 17
level 7
四月残花 楼主
恩恩 谢谢抹茶的建议~ 我下次会注意的~~
你和咧君的歌我还在不断重听…… 真的太有爱了~
2011年06月01日 17点06分 18
level 7
四月残花 楼主
于是你没有摔倒就好……我知道你最爱我了~ 亲一个!
你喜欢的那句话其实我并没有花很多心思写的…… 喜欢就好 -v-
所以以后我们也去殉情吧哈哈哈! (被拖出枪毙)
2011年06月01日 17点06分 19
level 7
四月残花 楼主
。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。滚。
2011年06月01日 17点06分 20
level 7
四月残花 楼主
以后我可能会翻译…… 也有可能会请小T替我翻译的……
有了翻译版本以后再来看吧~ 0v0
2011年06月01日 17点06分 21
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