最近英语水平下降了，顺便练练英语吧，好多东西都纠结不出来，有错的话是肯定的，有错就指出来吧

Long long ago,there was a beautiful star in the universe.The name of the star was
almighty-star.The people in the star were almighty and beautiful.And all the people
were girls,they never grow old.They liked traveling in others world.They called
others world "二次元".All the girls in that star called Mary Sue,they believe in
a master---Snow Empress.
In the earth,some people liked Mary Sue but some people not.In the history,a group of hated Mary Sue people gathered together.They compositioned a team,anti Mary Sue
together.They are so powerful.
Soon,the Mary Sue lost.The almighty-star destruction.People the live happily ever
after.


●▽●其实那三个晃瞎狗眼的字你写成Twice yuan没人会有意见【喂！

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本来想那么写，但总觉得很别扭，就写中文了【其实还想写拼音的

英语废路过…

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觉得那个很像第二张人民币【yuan么

●▽●默默看着一连串鸟语突然蹦出了“二次元”....

看着就奇怪吧= =

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啊啦好吧●▽●二次元这词有官方翻译么
最近都爱玩鸟语哪天Me也来一次

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要不然呢●▽●难道写circle，那才奇怪吧，元也本来就是YUAN啊

英语培优筛人，今天考完回来，那卷子好难，考完后直吐血，对于英语什么的绝望了【抱歉，爆粗了】

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第二个圆圈

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貌似没有吧= =

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是两次圆圈才对●▽●

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是两次圆圈才对●▽●

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眼花了，如果二次元那不能是second yuan或者是second world么【自我理解的

二次元...
其实还可以叫Another world...

其他世界么……

另一个世界~~~~~~哦哦~~【巫婆状

表示英语什么的最有爱了><
于是第一句什么有一个很美丽的明星在宇宙我华丽的囧了- -
The people in the star were almighty and beautiful？这句似乎有点问题【无视我吧- -
于是二元次不是二维的平面空间么，可以是two-dimension.