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跪求大神帮我改一下这一篇作文的语法 Several people to ride in a hot air balloon flying at high altitude, Suddenly the balloon trouble falling down, The balloon floated to an island .then they hunted animal and make a house. one year later. They found a savage. The savage name is Elton. Then they are faced with a serious problem, A group of Pirates want to boarded to the island, but the pirate ship is someone placed mines sunk, pirate leader Bob, Harvey was also killed. Captain Nemo saved them. Captain Nemo told them to let them escape as soon as possible, the island will soon be volcano eruption, the island will sink. But Captain Nemo said he was old, will soon die, also don't want to go. Then a few people made the night boat, sail away. When they came to the safe place, volcano eruption, the unknown island sank, leaving a pile of rocks above sea level, it is the tomb of Captain Nemo When they came to the safe place, volcano eruption, the unknown island sank, leaving a pile of rocks above sea level, it is the tomb of Captain Nemo 几个人乘坐热气球高空飞行,忽然气球出了故障不断下落,气球飘到了一个无名荒岛上,于是他们狩猎动物和做房子 一年之后,他们发现了一个野人,他的名字是elton 接着他们又面临一个严重的问题,一群海盗想登上这个无名荒岛,海盗船被有人安放的水雷炸沉,海盗头目鲍勃,哈维也被炸死了。 尼摩船长救了他们。尼摩船长告诉他们让他们尽快逃走,这座荒岛马上要火山喷发了,整个小岛会沉没。但尼摩船长说他老了,马上就要死了,也不想走了。 于是几个人连夜做了船,驾船逃走了。当他们走到安全的地方时,火山喷发了,那个无名荒岛沉没,只剩下海平面以上的一堆礁石,那是尼摩船长的坟墓
跪求大神帮我改一下这个作文的语法 Several people to ride in a hot air balloon flying at high altitude, Suddenly the balloon trouble falling down, The balloon floated to an island .then they hunted animal and make a house. one year later. They found a savage. The savage name is Elton. Then they are faced with a serious problem, A group of Pirates want to boarded to the island, but the pirate ship is someone placed mines sunk, pirate leader Bob, Harvey was also killed. Captain Nemo saved them. Captain Nemo told them to let them escape as soon as possible, the island will soon be volcano eruption, the island will sink. But Captain Nemo said he was old, will soon die, also don't want to go. Then a few people made the night boat, sail away. When they came to the safe place, volcano eruption, the unknown island sank, leaving a pile of rocks above sea level, it is the tomb of Captain Nemo When they came to the safe place, volcano eruption, the unknown island sank, leaving a pile of rocks above sea level, it is the tomb of Captain Nemo 几个人乘坐热气球高空飞行,忽然气球出了故障不断下落,气球飘到了一个无名荒岛上,于是他们狩猎动物和做房子 一年之后,他们发现了一个野人,他的名字是elton 接着他们又面临一个严重的问题,一群海盗想登上这个无名荒岛,海盗船被有人安放的水雷炸沉,海盗头目鲍勃,哈维也被炸死了。 尼摩船长救了他们。尼摩船长告诉他们让他们尽快逃走,这座荒岛马上要火山喷发了,整个小岛会沉没。但尼摩船长说他老了,马上就要死了,也不想走了。 于是几个人连夜做了船,驾船逃走了。当他们走到安全的地方时,火山喷发了,那个无名荒岛沉没,只剩下海平面以上的一堆礁石,那是尼摩船长的坟墓
跪求大神帮我改一下这一个作文的语法 Several people to ride in a hot air balloon flying at high altitude, Suddenly the balloon trouble falling down, The balloon floated to an island .then they hunted animal and make a house. one year later. They found a savage. The savage name is Elton. Then they are faced with a serious problem, A group of Pirates want to boarded to the island, but the pirate ship is someone placed mines sunk, pirate leader Bob, Harvey was also killed. Captain Nemo saved them. Captain Nemo told them to let them escape as soon as possible, the island will soon be volcano eruption, the island will sink. But Captain Nemo said he was old, will soon die, also don't want to go. Then a few people made the night boat, sail away. When they came to the safe place, volcano eruption, the unknown island sank, leaving a pile of rocks above sea level, it is the tomb of Captain Nemo When they came to the safe place, volcano eruption, the unknown island sank, leaving a pile of rocks above sea level, it is the tomb of Captain Nemo 几个人乘坐热气球高空飞行,忽然气球出了故障不断下落,气球飘到了一个无名荒岛上,于是他们狩猎动物和做房子 一年之后,他们发现了一个野人,他的名字是elton 接着他们又面临一个严重的问题,一群海盗想登上这个无名荒岛,海盗船被有人安放的水雷炸沉,海盗头目鲍勃,哈维也被炸死了。 尼摩船长救了他们。尼摩船长告诉他们让他们尽快逃走,这座荒岛马上要火山喷发了,整个小岛会沉没。但尼摩船长说他老了,马上就要死了,也不想走了。 于是几个人连夜做了船,驾船逃走了。当他们走到安全的地方时,火山喷发了,那个无名荒岛沉没,只剩下海平面以上的一堆礁石,那是尼摩船长的坟墓
谁能帮我改一下这篇作文的语法 Several people to ride in a hot air balloon flying at high altitude, Suddenly the balloon trouble falling down, The balloon floated to an island .then they hunted animal and make a house. one year later. They found a savage. The savage name is Elton. Then they are faced with a serious problem, A group of Pirates want to boarded to the island, but the pirate ship is someone placed mines sunk, pirate leader Bob, Harvey was also killed. Captain Nemo saved them. Captain Nemo told them to let them escape as soon as possible, the island will soon be volcano eruption, the island will sink. But Captain Nemo said he was old, will soon die, also don't want to go. Then a few people made the night boat, sail away. When they came to the safe place, volcano eruption, the unknown island sank, leaving a pile of rocks above sea level, it is the tomb of Captain Nemo When they came to the safe place, volcano eruption, the unknown island sank, leaving a pile of rocks above sea level, it is the tomb of Captain Nemo 几个人乘坐热气球高空飞行,忽然气球出了故障不断下落,气球飘到了一个无名荒岛上,于是他们狩猎动物和做房子 一年之后,他们发现了一个野人,他的名字是elton 接着他们又面临一个严重的问题,一群海盗想登上这个无名荒岛,海盗船被有人安放的水雷炸沉,海盗头目鲍勃,哈维也被炸死了。 尼摩船长救了他们。尼摩船长告诉他们让他们尽快逃走,这座荒岛马上要火山喷发了,整个小岛会沉没。但尼摩船长说他老了,马上就要死了,也不想走了。 于是几个人连夜做了船,驾船逃走了。当他们走到安全的地方时,火山喷发了,那个无名荒岛沉没,只剩下海平面以上的一堆礁石,那是尼摩船长的坟墓
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