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作文求批改!!感谢大家了!!! Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only. Recently,more and more parents would like to send their children develop many kind of skills for the sake of a successful future,holding the issue that people with many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only.However,I absolutely disagree with this statement. First of all,there is no positive correlation between success and skills. Ma Yun, the CEO of the biggest Internet company in China,masters no skill relevant to Internet technology or computer science;Mao Zedong,the leader of Chinese army during the second World War,knows nothing about the weapons;Luo Yonghao,who creates the Hammer Phone,used to be an English teacher .These people have none professional skills but defeat others who have more specific skills to obtain success.Therefore,developing skills does not equal to success. More importantly,developing many skills sometimes drives you away from success.The more skills you want to develop,the more time you need to grasp them.Fore example,my parents sent me to learn a lot in my young age:playing basketball,learning painting and playing the piano,with the wish that more skills mean a succussful future.I dedicated amount of time to practice and become skillful,but these skills don*t help me to get a good job.I have to study hard to accuire knowledge and get a master degree——they are the key to a well-paid job and then a wealthy life. Thirdly,some people who develop one skill only can be very successful as well.Kobe Bryant only plays basketball very well but not in other ball games;Usain Bolt,the man who runs the fastest in the world,only can be faster than Sun Yang on the land,who swim the fastest;in addition,you cannot ask Deng Yaping to win a gold medal in a badminton game.These athletes are all the best in specific field,so the people who can do the best in their career will also get huge success even they develop only one skill. To conclude,it is not how many skills you develop that matters the most but how well you perform does.People who have many skills are not more successful than people who have only one certain skills.As long as you become the best one in your field,you will definitely achieve success.
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