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麻烦大家帮忙看看这篇文帮忙提点意见,谢谢 I’m very happy that China has a chance to hold the Olympic Games. It is a successful symbol. When our city won this chance, I was so excited .Because it means China has the ability to host Olympic GamesWe have long history and brilliant culture. Many famous people are Chinese. Including: Kong zi 、Meng Zi and so on. People from other countries called China helping etiquette. And our food is the most popular one in the world. Roast duck is the specialty of china. Now lots of people start studying Chinese in the world. Now we have a lot of plans of the Olympic Games. But we haven’t carried them out yet. We want our city to be different from what it is like now. But what can we do? We should show our merit. For example: We need to improve our public morals. In 2008, every one should be moral, this reflects on everybody's civilization etiquette and educational level.Now let me tell you a true story. My mother’s company organized a trip three years ago. On the way some people want to go to the toilet. So do I. when I go into the toilet, I saw lots of maggots. I felt sick. But now the toilets become clean. And some of them needn’t to scour it. In 2008, when you are in the toilet you may see the sky and grass. We are getting ready for the Olympic Games in many ways .In our city some people always destroy the public property now. But in 2008, no one can do it. Some people do not protect the environment now, but in 2008, Beijing will become a garden city. Sky will be blue. Grass will cover the land. Birds will sing a song in the tree. The traffic is bad in Beijing now but in 2008, the new road system permits the free flow of traffic at all times.. If we want to make all the above become true, we should try our best. I want to be a Volunteer .One reason is that I want to help other people. The other reason is I hope I can get more social experience.Let’s show our best to the foreigners. Make them feel the Olympic Games in China is the best one in the world.
麻烦大家帮忙看看这篇文章,谢谢 I’m very happy that China has a chance to hold the Olympic Games. It is a successful symbol. When our city won this chance, I was so excited .Because it means China has the ability to host Olympic GamesWe have long history and brilliant culture. Many famous people are from china. Including: Kong zi 、Hua luo geng and so on.. Other people called china helping etiquette. And our food is most popular in the world. roast duck is the specialty of china. Now lots of people started studying Chinese in the world. Now we have a lot of imaginations about the Olympic Games. But we cloud not realize it. We want our city to be a different city as now. But what can we do? We must correct our mistakes. For example: We need to improve our quality. In 2008, every one should have good quality, this reflects on everybody's civilization etiquette and educational level.We are getting ready for the Olympic Games in many ways .In our city some people always destroy the public property now. But in 2008, no one can do it. Some people do not protect the environment now, but in 2008, Beijing will become a garden city. Sky will blue. Grass will cover the land. Birds will sing a song in the tree. The traffic is bad in Beijing but reach 2008, it will be very convenient to run. But want to realize it, everybody must try to do it, take action from me. I want to be a Volunteer .One reason is I want to help other people, and the other is I hope I can get more social experience.这是一篇关于奥运的文章,希望大家多提宝贵意见。谢谢
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