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有没有人帮我挑一下作文的错误T-T 还有哪里不好改一下 直接正文的部分 Complaints about The Pacific Hotel Last week, I came to New York for an important meeting and I choosed your hotel to stay because of the good fame. But to my disappointed, things are not so good as I heard. I am writing to complain about the service of your hotel. Firstly, I did not see your hotel car when I reached the airport. It had been late for 40 minutes when the car arrive! Fortunately, I have not been late for an important meeting, or I do not think you can afford the consequences. However, Do you konw a waste of 40 minute means what to me? It is also a waste of life and money. Secondly, because of the needs of my work, watching TV news everyday is important to me. I have requested one when I booked this room, but there is still no one. Though you sent one to my room the next day, I still feel not very pleased. The last problem,at the end of the first day, I wanted to take a shower to relax myself. What was waiting for me? No hot water offered. Did your hotel think the temperature was still too high to use hot water? Everything happened on the first day. It seemed that I have not do a reservation. Does your hotel always do one thing until the customers remaind you the second time? I hope you can pay attention to those questions and give me a satisfied answer. It is very important of hte first impression. I think you do not want to lose any customer because of a small question. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
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