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请大家帮我修改下我的这个作文吧,谢谢啦 My college life Several years ago,when I was a middle school student,my teacher and parents always told me how nice the college life is,colourful and wonderful,as if that is the final destination in my life.Several years later,when I have really touched it,I find it is not that simple. Today, when I walk along the road in the college,things around me are changing every second,so all of what I face is completely new to me,they just bring me the daily fresh,unknown and interesting feelings.I can go to the library to read the books I’m interested in,I can also join in the clubs to share my opinions with others,because I believe communication is the best way to build the bidge between two souls.There are so many choices for me to show the best of myself to the world.Oh!I love it! While, wonderful is not the whole thing,it is just one hand of the college life.On the other hand,college life is much more realistic than the middle school life. In middle school time,I just have to worry about my degrees,the other things are almost out of my business,but in the college,the pressure comes from both study and the real life,it let me become more mature ,I have to consider more about my future and my life,I think college is the start of my real life.Somebody says high school time is competitive,because everybody is trying hard to get the entrance ticket of the university.While,in the college ,competitive can be also smelt everywhere,because I have to compete for not only the scores,but also the the future of my life.    College life is just as what it is like,not so great as we think,but I still thanks to it,because it let me know more about the real world and help me to enter the society.Good or bad,this is college life.Just enjoy it! 有错误的地方请大家指出,如果大家有更好的语句也请给我说一下,谢谢
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